Hook
How would you feel if someone came to you ordering you to work for him or her without any explanations? Or worse, how would you feel if that same person forced you to clean the mess that others make in an almost dictatorial way? This is what happened to the students of Zurich International School after a new clean up measure was set up by the school’s director.
Intro
Who, What, where, when
The clean up measure is an enormous educational failure that does not consider the feelings and the sense of injustice amongst the students
Argument 1
It is completely unfair since the mess is almost entirely created by the 9th graders.
Argument 2
It did not change the students’ thoughts about cleaning up and did not create any feelings of carefulness and consideration for the school. No one really cares about it and few people actually do their job.
Concession and Final Argument
We must admit that the school has actually become cleaner, nevertheless, this only worked because the 9th graders saw that everything was their fault. They saw how everyone became extremely irritated.
This gives even more proof to the failure of the idea since an educational institution should not put its students against themselves in an intimidating and depreciatory environment
Conclusion
Mr. McLeod’s idea shows how even our leaders may be horribly wrong sometimes, and how unfairness in schools only creates more problems and revolt