Showing posts with label Poetry. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Poetry. Show all posts

Friday, February 12, 2010

Reflection on commentary

The major problem that I had when I was writing the commentary was related to my time management. I am pretty satisfied with my analysis and I think that I could get a lot out of the passage. I understood everything and could apply my knowledge of the themes, motifs and literary devices effectively. However, without the time it did not work very well and I was not able to show even half of what thought. I spent too much time in the first paragraph (context) and I think I explained the first theme in too much detail, which did not allow me to go to the other themes.

I also perceived that it helps a lot if we think in the structure for the essay beforehand. By knowing what should go into each paragraph and how to organize them we can save a lot of our precious time.

Monday, December 7, 2009

Haiku

There are people screaming.

The wind blows powerful

Souls fall from the walls

World Trade center/Autumn/deaths


Blazing sand on my feet

Laughs, smiles and sweets

Our story is complete

Love story/ Summer– Good, beautiful, vivid


The cold and the grey

Real demons that think they can pray

Death, In every way

Humans destroying the world/ (Pollution/wars/…)/Winter